playtest 1 speedrunning platformer

Hello, my name is BrockTheCock, and I want to help you to make this a better game.
In the game, there are some aspects that warrant constructive criticism. The gameplay mechanics are dry and blatantly stolen, and is literally just bad in every way possible. The challenge posed by the spikes and creatures is dumb asf, and it occasionally makes me want to kick your head off , it is unbalanced asf. To enhance the overall player experience, add hot men. Additionally, the incorporation of  hot men might contribute to a more dynamic and enjoyable gameplay.  African American sea urchins and no legs goombas might be cool, but it is not enough to make this game enjoyable.  Overall, the concept behind the game is strait ass, just give up on making games bruh. 

awesome game no improvements needed

Hello, my name is Brock, and I want to help you to make this a better game.
In the game, there are some aspects that warrant constructive criticism. The gameplay mechanics, while creative, may sometimes lack the necessary precision and responsiveness required for a smooth and enjoyable gaming experience. The challenge posed by the spikes and creatures can be exhilarating, but it occasionally leans towards frustration, as the difficulty curve may not always be balanced. To enhance the overall player experience, addressing issues related to control responsiveness and refining the level design to ensure a more gradual increase in difficulty could be beneficial. Additionally, the incorporation of engaging and varied mechanics, power-ups, or interactive elements might contribute to a more dynamic and enjoyable gameplay. Wind fans might be cool, but it is not enough to make this game enjoyable.  Overall, the concept behind the game is intriguing, and with some refinements, it has the potential to be a memorable and enjoyable gaming experience.